IRC:English:Victorious Army

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18:51 <+Azeria|Baby> yes
18:51 <+Azeria|Baby> i have that :
18:51 <+Azeria|Baby> A victorious army gains the advantage before of having sought the battle. An army dedicated to the defeat fights in the hope to gain.
18:52 <+Azeria|Baby> it's a translation
18:52 <+Azeria|Baby> from a french sentence
18:52 <+Azeria|Baby> but it's not very beautiful i think, can u fix it ???
18:52 <+Azeria|Baby> i'm not very good in english :/
18:54 <+ChaZZerS> You only need to change two things, really.
18:54 <+Azeria|Baby> what ?
18:54 <+Azeria|Baby> which things ?
18:55 <+ChaZZerS> change "of" to "even", and "sought" to "fought"
18:56 <+Azeria|Baby> A victorious army gains the advantage before even having fought the battle. An army dedicated to the defeat fights in the hope to gain.
18:56 <+Azeria|Baby> :)
18:56 <+Azeria|Baby> thx
18:56 <+Azeria|Baby> a lot
18:56 <+Azeria|Baby> kiss :p
18:57 <+ChaZZerS> lol alright

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